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Tomorrow by the ocean by ~citizenvisuelle:iconcitizenvisuelle:

Categories Photography > Conceptual

©2006-2009 ~citizenvisuelle
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what
sound does the world make when you take my fingertips and save them well in the palm of your hand as you step with me
over branches that feel from trees windshaken like we are windshaken
every single night and so often mistaken
so often mistaken even in the inside of each others chest
Where will we rest, dearest?
maybe tomorrow by the ocean
you'll carry my body into the water and hold the back of my head into it
until the hair falls in long black strings from my head and these strings will finally connect my mind with the ocean
and I will look up at your face that is
guised safely in sunlight that burns onto
the back of your head
while my thoughts leave
and drift away in saltwater
become seashells
to be opened by someone who understands them better

Tomorrow by the ocean
we could start again and I would understand you better
I would take my time to understand
the essence of your being
I would look into your face and stop seeing
the way your eye lashes are curled
the freckles upon your cheeks and nose
your eyeballs dancing under your eyelids
I would stop seeing only that and finally see what you mean..

tomorrow by the ocean

at some point your hands would let go
and let me drift




nova



him

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~nihilistictendencies Feb 23, 2006, 11:22:37 AM
this is wonderful; I like how the water sort of fades off - sort of dreamy

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~citizenvisuelle Feb 23, 2006, 11:24:38 AM
nice to know you like it . exactly that.. the light was incredible that day. that type of light that deletes all line between sleep and awake

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~Fanyare Feb 23, 2006, 11:47:29 AM
Really like the light, the colours and the composition. And the hat :)
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~themistaken15 Feb 23, 2006, 11:50:41 AM
It is dreamy!
Really cool concept!
10/10!

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"Llegó a los veinte años sin aprender a leer y escribir, sin servirse de los cubiertos en la mesa, paseándose desnuda por la casa, porque su naturaleza se resistía a cualquier clase convencionalismos."

(Cien Años de Soledad, Gabriel García Márquez)
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~situs Feb 23, 2006, 11:50:58 AM
is the sea dirty?

nice nice light
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~citizenvisuelle Feb 23, 2006, 11:56:06 AM
well. that lake was dirty yes. but I'll speak of it as an ocean.. because I miss the ocean so much that I'll see it in everything

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~Zimtgruen Feb 23, 2006, 12:00:09 PM
jeah, das find ich cool, ich mag den Hut vom Jonni (is doch der Jonni/Jonnie/Jonny =) ) und die spiegelung im Wasser gefällt mir auch =)
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~citizenvisuelle Feb 23, 2006, 12:03:35 PM
yep .. von den dreien ist es definitiv der jonni :D , freut mich das dir das bild gefällt ! das wasser sah an dem tag aus wie ein eisschollen bedecktes meer ausm flugzeug gesehen :)

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~Zimtgruen Feb 23, 2006, 12:17:45 PM
hehe
ja stimmt es sieht echt sehr aus wie das Meer, hast du gut gemacht =)
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