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:iconcitizenvisuelle:
full view option highly recommended..why narrow your eyes when you can leave them relaxed?
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how your eyes change how they change how the very inside of your iris
seems to rearrange with the passing of time with
the moment that daylight
swallows the night
sucks the black ink out of the inside of your eyes
but is too weak to write and you would like to write a new page of your life but
you cannot even feel the page
and the pen seems to have become
a sixth finger
seems to be just there
not anymore for special moments
how your eyes change
when you tell me you love me
when you tell me you hate me
and you cannot even see those fragments
you cannot even see how different the language is
from the one your tongue uses
and yet you stare at me
as day becomes evening and the
white reflecting from your eyes seems the only sign of
soul in this room
but I know no longer for me
I know no longer for me
does that mean I will cease to see the beauty of them
because they are not mine anymore?
does that mean my eyes will start
to filter yours like
receiving
mere signals
data
oh
look
a
black
iris
and that
will be it?

I've been chasing
the path that the lightwaves take when reaching your eyes too often
but I can't seem to follow



nova

eyes

morning light


evening light


and how they feel
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:icondark0harlequin:
~dark0harlequin Aug 6, 2006   Photographer
you are a genius.
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:icongreeneyezz:
Very nice shots!
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:iconshattered-soleil:
~shattered-soleil Feb 3, 2006   Photographer
beautiful. wow.
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:iconpaulburn:
`paulburn Jan 13, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
this is FANTASTIC! the clarity of all this is amazing and the reflection on your eye is PERFECT :glomp: :+fav:
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:iconlinteli:
How enchanting your eyes are and how they seem to change in the light. I really find this a beautiful idea and the way you've taken the photos is just fantastic. The morning, when it seems that the first rays of sun illuminating the city reaches your eyes painting reflections and the evening, when all is blue and your gaze somewhat distant and thoughtful. The poem left me a bit confused though, because I get it and still don't- But maybe that's just what makes it fascinating and abstract in a good way. :heart:
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:iconarwenita:
`arwenita Oct 20, 2005   Interface Designer
lovely shots and croping... love the way you created this composition :heart:
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:iconseyla:
Gorgeous composition! :clap:

i love teh description too!



:kiss:, Lee
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:iconpopos:
mm.... :heart:

this is a weird thing to say, but i like how the little hairs on the eyelid catch the light in the first frame.
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